For this assignment, DJ had to write a conversation between a duck, cat, and mouse, without using those words. Here is his story.
Today I'm going to tell you a story about a cat,mouse,and duck.Enjoy.Once upon a time in Animal Land Ms.Squeek is just out looking for cheese when out of nowhere Mr.Quack falls out of the sky like a shooting star."Hey Ms.Squeek what are you doing out here?" asked Mr.Quack."I'm looking for cheese,American cheese please...do you have any?"asked Ms.Squeek."Hmm,let me check, nope that's a tuba,nope that's a jumbo jet,Nope that's my spare underpants,aha!I found some.Here you go."said Mr Quack."Oh thank you,thank you,thank you,thank you.This is the nicest thing someone hos ever done for me."said Ms.Squeek.Then at that very moment Sir Meow came out of nowhere."Hey guys whats up?" he asks."Mr.Quack was just giving me me some cheese."she said backing away from Sir Meow."Cheese huh,hmm do have any fish Mr.Quack."asked sir meow"Let me check. No that's a chocolate bar,no that's a ticket to Goosebumps Monster blood,here we go,one fresh can of tuna,yuck." Groan all you want to me it is very tasty."After they ate they went to the movies to watch Goosebumps Monster Blood,got scared out of there pants,and lived happily ever after.The End. P.S. if you have kids try reading this story to them because I guarantee the will like it.Sincerely DJ.
This is very good. You just learned about quotation marks, and while you have the concept sort of, you went a little crazy with them. Once you put a period, question mark, or exclamation mark, your sentence has ended, and a new one begins. You have to put ending quotations, and then beginning ones, if you choose to use them. Good, creative story. Great job!
ReplyDeleteIts really wonderful finding new perspectives from children. They seem almost impossible to get once grown up!!!
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