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Monday, November 9, 2009

Sailing With Dad

DJ's writing assignment for today, is to write a story about a boy,playing video game, while sailing on the ocean, with his Dad.

One day off the coast of Florida,a boy was playing a video game with his Dad on a ship.The boy was being orange and the Dad was bring white."Hey Dad,lets go get Cortex."said the boy. "What ever floats your boat." said Dad kidding.While they were playing the ship rocked on the ocean making it hard to use the controller.Back and forth.back and forth,back and forth the ship rocked."Look out for that Ratsicle Dad" said the boy. "Whoa,that was a close one"said Dad.The ocean was loud, they could hear the dolphins squeaking and the hump back whales aoohing" Yeah, next level"shouted the boy."Oh no!" It's up to you now"said the Dad surprised he got killed."(Gulp)" said the boy.The boy was trying as hard as he could to destroy the evil Cortex and in with one life left the end Cortex got sent to a fiery grave."You did it" said the Dad."Can we go home now" asked the boy?"Yes lets go home"said the Dad. So they went home,had dinner,and lived happily ever after.The End.

1 comment:

  1. I like this one, buddy. You used your imagination, and the story had good flow.